tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5965642641808565740.post2307249980175541379..comments2023-06-03T07:59:46.540-07:00Comments on The A.D. KAAL: Odd JobAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01357271956158475827noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5965642641808565740.post-1264816809867393772014-03-24T07:34:15.435-07:002014-03-24T07:34:15.435-07:00Yes.. this looks better :)Yes.. this looks better :)Pawan Hegdehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07291059145444669774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5965642641808565740.post-40009568770290002862014-03-23T12:02:19.159-07:002014-03-23T12:02:19.159-07:00Hope it's better now. Thanks for the input. :)...Hope it's better now. Thanks for the input. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01357271956158475827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5965642641808565740.post-76868523711331746002014-03-23T11:53:20.057-07:002014-03-23T11:53:20.057-07:00Hmmm... Let me think then..... :)Hmmm... Let me think then..... :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01357271956158475827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5965642641808565740.post-59460560645822807722014-03-23T11:47:03.176-07:002014-03-23T11:47:03.176-07:00Great concept again :)
But the last paragraph bro...Great concept again :)<br /><br />But the last paragraph broke the charm of the story for me. Maybe a more potent line in its place would have done it.Pawan Hegdehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07291059145444669774noreply@blogger.com